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		<title>Realism, Heresy, and Opportunities Squandered</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 09 May 2010 22:52:16 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>mack505</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>When NBC&#8217;s Trauma premiered last fall EMTs and Paramedics nationwide, myself included, blasted it for its lack of realism and poor portrayal of our profession.  Ratings tanked, and the show went into hiatus.  It returned briefly this spring, and personally I felt the episodes were getting better.  There was potential there, but the network finally [...]
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When NBC&#8217;s <em>Trauma</em> premiered last fall EMTs and Paramedics nationwide, <a href="http://notesfrommosquitohill.com/2009/09/ok-nbc-i-watched-it.html" target="_blank">myself included</a>, blasted it for its lack of realism and poor portrayal of our profession.  Ratings tanked, and the show went into hiatus.  It returned briefly this spring, and personally I felt the episodes were getting better.  There was potential there, but the network finally allowed the show to die a quiet death.</p>
<p>After my previous post I sat down to watch something on Hulu this afternoon, and I randomly selected an <em>Emergency!</em> episode.  I always love a good <em>Emergency!</em></p>
<p>But I have to point out the following sequence:<br />
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<p>CPR in the hosebed of the Ward, while screaming Code 3 across the county.  I love it, it&#8217;s great TV, and it&#8217;s horribly unrealistic.</p>
<p><em>Emergency!</em> did wonderful things to raise awareness of our profession when EMS was in its infancy.  I know they had technical advisors and tried to maintain a level of realism, but there are moments like this one where drama trumps reality.  There are times when the acting is bad, when the situations are contrived, when I&#8217;m left screaming at the television.  It doesn&#8217;t matter.  It&#8217;s still great, fun entertainment.</p>
<p>I can&#8217;t help thinking that we squandered an opportunity when we blasted <em>Trauma</em> and left it to die in the street.</p>
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<p>BTW, I was loving that old 1965 Chevy Suburban ambulance right up until I realized they were going to crash it.  Ouch!  I know it was only old then, but it&#8217;s a classic now.  I&#8217;d love to have that old B&amp;M coaster siren on the Medic 9 today.</p>
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		<title>OK, NBC, I watched it.</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Sep 2009 23:33:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>mack505</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p style="margin-bottom: 0in">I was working last night. No helicopters crashed, nothing blew up, and I certainly did not get laid. In fact, we treated one seizure patient and watched Monday Night Football. Thanks to the magic that is TiVo, I finally got the chance to watch Trauma this afternoon.</p> <p style="margin-bottom: 0in"></p> <p style="margin-bottom: 0in">I [...]
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p style="margin-bottom: 0in">I was working last night.  No helicopters crashed, nothing blew up, and I certainly did not get laid.  In fact, we treated one seizure patient and watched Monday Night Football.  Thanks to the magic that is TiVo, I finally got the chance to watch <a href="http://www.nbc.com/trauma/"><i>Trauma</i></a> this afternoon.</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in">I have to say I wasn&#8217;t as disappointed as I had expected.  That&#8217;s not saying much,  as my expectations could not have been much lower after the promos.  The medicine was bad; the special effects were overdone.  The sex scene was a cliché, as was Nancy&#8217;s uniform.  The MCI was a joke, and the gratuitous helicopter crash was in very poor taste.  We in EMS are a bit sensitive about the safety of helicopter transportation lately, and Americans in general are still sensitive about aircraft crashing into skyscrapers.</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in">BUT. . .</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in">I&#8217;m not ready to write the DNR order yet.  I&#8217;m keeping in mind that this is TV.  It&#8217;s a show about paramedics in the sense that<i> House</i> is a doctor show, <i>CSI</i> is about the crime lab, or <i>Rescue Me </i>is about the FDNY.  Paramedicine provides the setting and dramatic fodder, but it&#8217;s not the story.  I expect the story to overshadow the medicine.</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in">I&#8217;m also keeping in mind that it was the pilot episode.  Pilots must establish the scene, give background to the characters, and sell the show to the network and the audience.  Hopefully the later episodes will focus more on the characters and less on the stunts.</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in">So I&#8217;m willing to give it a few more episodes.   </p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in">HOWEVER</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in">NBC, I do have a few suggestions:</p>
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<li>Hire a technical advisor.  The medicine doesn&#8217;t have to be great and it need not displace the story, but if it&#8217;s chronically bad you will eventually lose me and the rest of my profession.  You don&#8217;t have to be 100% authentic, but please be believable.</li>
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<li>Lose the helicopters.  We don&#8217;t believe them flying in a major urban area.  It&#8217;s unsafe (as you over-dramatized) and unnecessary.  If your Rebel-with-a-cause needs a special ride, put him in a cool Charger like <a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/leewilson/sets/72157612270279004/detail/">Wake County EMS</a> and let him rip around the city.  Or let the SPFX guys cook up a  Rabbitmobile.</li>
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<li>Develop the characters, but don&#8217;t get too lost in their private lives.  I want to see how paramedics act when they&#8217;re being paramedics.  Don&#8217;t let the setting become just a prop for some unrelated story.</li>
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<li>Please let Boone&#8217;s character come out and play.  Any of us who have been in EMS for a while have ghosts.  We didn&#8217;t acquire them in such a dramatic manner, but how we deal with them is epic story fodder.  I can root for Boone.</li>
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<li>Remember that EMS is about people, not explosions or defibrillations.  If you read a few EMS blogs, you will see that there are hundreds of great human stories out there.  There are also hundreds of characters and personalities on both sides of the stethoscope.</li>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in">So NBC, good luck.  You could have another <i>ER</i> here if you focus on good situational drama instead of blowing things up.  Please don&#8217;t disappoint me like you did with <i>Third Watch.</i></p>
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